Beautiful stories, I really liked how much your older sister means to you and how much she impacted you.
I loved the story of your sister, I hope I am that much of an influence on my little brother.
I liked how you talked about your family and made them important.
It was cool that you tried to get the audience involved. It didn't really work, but it was pretty clever. It was nice that you talked about how much you love your family. I actually enjoyed listening to your speech. Good job, buddy!
i love all the qoutes! i liked how you told a story about you and your sister!
I loved it! Very inspirational!
Working for a purpose and for an overall benefit of society is much better then simply working for recognition and money. You speech exemplifies living purposfully!!
Great job using quotes and keeping the audience interested.
good job funny and informative
I liked the way you presented it, very clever! Good work man!
Your parents' life lessons were really nice, I loved your childhood stories with your sister. You're a great speaker and I enjoyed your enthusiasm about your family. Good Job!