I really enjoyed listening to your story, how you presented it was great. It was inspiring to hear how even through the tough things and being by yourself you still strived to be all that you wanted to be.
I liked how your story slowly built on itself so slowly develop the person you are today. I liked all of the visuals you had to show the different points in your life.
I like how you put yourself out there and you said you were shy at one point and you broke out of it and became the class clown. I like how you just wanted to be yourself because there isn't anything wrong with you. I like how you were able to make yourself happy after some darker times. I like how you always smiled and laughed during your presentation. I wish you the best of luck in life!
Tali, You didn't seem shy at all! You looked completely comfortable talking in front of people! I loved your theme and congratulations on making it into Stephans College, you will do great!
You did a great job getting very emotional and letting the audience into your personal life. It was clear that you were talking from your heart and you did an all around a great job.
good voice could hear her from the back of the classroom, i liked her pictures and they were put together very well!
ReplyDeleteyou looked comfortable up there, no fidgeting or anything. Good job Talia, very well done.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed listening to your story, how you presented it was great. It was inspiring to hear how even through the tough things and being by yourself you still strived to be all that you wanted to be.
ReplyDeleteI liked how your story slowly built on itself so slowly develop the person you are today. I liked all of the visuals you had to show the different points in your life.
ReplyDeleteI love your theme for your presentation. You spoke clearly and did great moving along in your presentation.
ReplyDeleteYou had a really beautiful theme, and your story was really touching. Fantastic job, your presentation was amazing!!!
ReplyDeleteI like how you put yourself out there and you said you were shy at one point and you broke out of it and became the class clown. I like how you just wanted to be yourself because there isn't anything wrong with you. I like how you were able to make yourself happy after some darker times. I like how you always smiled and laughed during your presentation. I wish you the best of luck in life!
ReplyDeleteTali you spoke really confidently. I loved what you talked about and your slide show presentation was really good.
ReplyDeleteYour speech was really good! I loved it! great job! Your striving for your dream from the beginning. well done!!
ReplyDeleteDid a very good job! Talked about what you really want to do and what your passions are. You also opened up a lot and told us more about your life
ReplyDeleteI like how you're following your dreams! That was a very good speech, it inspired me to do what I love. Good eye contact.
ReplyDeleteYour whole presentation was great! Your stories were great and the whole thing flowed really well
ReplyDeleteTali, You didn't seem shy at all! You looked completely comfortable talking in front of people! I loved your theme and congratulations on making it into Stephans College, you will do great!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job getting very emotional and letting the audience into your personal life. It was clear that you were talking from your heart and you did an all around a great job.
ReplyDeleteTali, I liked your beginning quote, it really exemplified your passion. You were very open and your speech was clearly well planned. Great job!
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